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  • Fantasy Novels Re: A Velvet's Gift

    Well Phorcys, I haven't critted for you in a while, I thought I might drop by and take a look at this piece. ^_^ This is very well written, and ...

    Dec 16, 2006
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Death of Mark

    Okay, I'm going to do this crit in Cal-form because it's much easier that way. ^_~ Everything I have to interject is in bark blue and bold. Sound good? Sounds ...

    Dec 14, 2006
  • Writing Activities Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever

    There was an earthquake! And the ground split! Lava spilled into the wounded earth, and endless torrent of molten rock! The people had been evacuated! But the houses were still ...

    Dec 14, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Do you?

    Oh, my friend. Incan will eat this alive. ^_~ Though I have to say, in this instance, that I agree with his (potential?) commentary. And I agree with writeme - ...

    Dec 14, 2006
  • Writing Tips Re: What do people do besides writing?

    Reading, playing the piano, listening to music, writing angry letters I never mail anywhere, writing happy letters I never mail anywhere, YWS-surfing, being neurotic, being tired, being complete. The

    Dec 14, 2006
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Signature Above You.

    I like the english part...what language is the other bit please? Russian. ;) T'is written in Cryllic. ^8/10 for Writeme ^_^

    Dec 14, 2006
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Signature Above You.

    ^ 8/10 - good concept

    Dec 14, 2006
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Signature Above You.

    10+/10 One of the best sigs I've seen, Dan. ;)

    Dec 10, 2006
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Signature Above You.

    ^ 8/10 First one's fine, the second not so much, but good shot. ^_~

    Dec 10, 2006
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Signature Above You.

    ^ 10/10... because everyone loves the WCA ^_^

    Dec 8, 2006
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Announcing YWS Reviewing Week!

    Ach -- I'm so sorry, Nate, I'm not going to be able to do this, you can take me off the list. -_- I thought I was going to be ...

    Nov 30, 2006
  • Lounge, The Re: Where Do YWS Members Come From?

    You'll notice we have no members from Siberia... Nate, you misorussist. XD ;) And no one seems to live in Pennsylvania, despite the trusty chart... o0

    Nov 30, 2006
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game

    What? Love, you say? You mean that bleak pastime of the lonely and bored? Haha - no. Maybe. Go ask Shan. He's nice and gullible, you might be able to ...

    Nov 30, 2006
  • Homework Help Re: Volumes by the Method of Cross Sections

    Hey, thanks a lot, Grif. ^_~ Without the two of you I would be very, very dead concerning this lesson. Calculus and I don't like each other. Thanks for the ...

    Nov 29, 2006
  • Lounge, The Re: Who do you admire?

    Well now that I've succeeded rambling on and embarassing Imp - the rest of the list. ^_~ My dad, definitely, he is one of the most amazing people I have ...

    Nov 29, 2006


Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield.
— Billy Collins